Mix it Together

This week we try to mix the concept of our video together. Because the concept of baton is really wonderful we try to hold the concept to our video. So basicly we will use Faye idea but mix it with some element from my script. The element from my script is we will give more information in the middle of our video, so it will be more clear and will not left people in confusion. Faye scenario also will be changed so we will not use the church as shoot area and only focusing on hospital and athletic track. Other problem that come in our mind in this new video is; How we can find a hospital as a shoot place? but after thinking a little bit we decide to make a fake hospital, and this fake hospital is actually located in our classroom at Blue Building.

At the end of the weeks we already decided that we will use 3 actors in advertisng; Emily, Doctor and one person as the one that pass baton to Emily hand.

We are so happy because this two weeks, the video idea really stressed we out and finally it finished and we can continue to make the video and concentrate on different tasks.

Two script

In the second week our group developed two script for our advertising, made by Faye and me. We arrive on diffcul situation to decide the right script to be used for our advertising, as we found the two sript has strong and weak points itself.

Faye script is using the relay baton as the main point, this baton is symbolized life, it being passed to another person to show that we helped other people to continue their life. The video will use three different places: church, running track and hospital. The story is about a girl named emily who is an running athlete but because of organ problem she cannot run anymore, however by some miracle she finally got new organ and she can run again. The problem is; in the video we didn't mention anything about organ donation and it can make viewer be confuse, we ask Toulla and she said it's true, and the second is we use to many places, it will take time and cost, in addition we hardly to get the church that we can use. However the baton initial idea is wonderful and we wan to keep it.

My script is using 4 people as the actor and it only use 1 places, the story is there's a boy who died because of car accidents and he still have good organ to donate. The places we will use for shoot is a park, it can be anywhere and i think it easy to find a park. In this park the dead boy is passing with people that need an organ, I planned to give information above their heads about the organ they needed. After the boy meet each person he will hug them and continue to walking, it repeated 3 times, in the end of the park the boy will look back to three people he hug before and smile, three y person that being hugged will also smile. The story symbolize the boy died, and he going to other life while three person he hugged will life, but the boy is happy because he can save other people life. The problem is the story is to simple and we want give information that you can be a living donor that is imposible in my script.

Finally when we ask Toulla she said that it will be a great video if we can mix it together, so we start to think in combining the idea.